Wednesday, April 23, 2025

The Bloop - Rhyming Story Contest - Horror -


My name is Anton Iroh, and I’ve a tale to share,

Of danger and great peril, a warning to beware.

It is the story of my ending, which I only share,

To caution you about the Bloop, in mind of your welfare. 

 

One morning I got ready for a trip upon the seas.

For working as a sailor, had been my expertise.

Sack filled with provisions, for all possibilities.

But I forgot to wind my timepiece, a choice which would displease.

 

The skies were filled with angst that day, I walked down to the pier.

A dark and eerie feeling promised trouble would appear.

But I walked on in spite of it, fist tight upon my gear,

And as I did, an awful feeling, gripped my chest with fear.

 

When I arrived in Harbortown, no glance would reach my eye.

Men looked away with quickened step, as they walked on by.

They moved so fast that they were gone before I could ask “why?”

I wondered if they felt the same strange, sense of dread as I.

 

Shaking off the sense of dread, filling heavy air.

I focused on my timepiece, seeing I had time to spare.

I walked into a tavern selling, wines from everywhere,

And called upon the barman, as I sat upon the chair.

 

“Pardon good sir,” I said to him, his back turned away,

“I wonder if you have, a calming drink for me today?”

He turned to me, and begged unspoken warning to convey.

Instead he placed a cup before me, and quietly said, “Pray.”

 

I thought it strange but drained my cup, looking at the time.

Realizing none had passed, as I drank my wine.

My timepiece had stopped moving, no tick, no tock, no chime.

“Watch out for the Bloop”, he said, as I left the man his dime. 

 

Running to the waterfront, to climb aboard my ship,

I thought not of the warning, only searched for Heavens Clip.

I’d missed my boat, I realized, as I reached the slip,

And found anchored in its stead, the S.S. Neptunes Grip.

 

The vessel welcomed me aboard, knowing I’d thought twice.

The wooden planks, worn and warped, barely would suffice.

The captain came with warning, “Don’t let the ship entice,

The skies will show this trip to bring, a sailors’ sacrifice.”

 

I almost turned, right back around, finding my way home,

But instead, we set to sail, on to the unknown.

Crew looked upon the waters, sudden urge to atone,

As if the seas before them, were to be their catacomb.

 

As night befell the schooner, I feared to close my eyes.

The darkness sank around us, from the blackened, empty skies.

I heard a terrorizing sound, as if the oceans’ cries.

A sound so awful that I swore, a demon would arise.

 

The sickening sound reminded me, of grinding bone on bone.

As if Hell itself, was dragging man down to its fiery throne.

I wanted to run, needed to hide, my fear was overgrown.

My instincts told me, this would end, in fire and brimstone.

 

 

“What is that sound mate?” I beseeched, as I held on to the sloop,

“The creature of deep,” He whispered in fear, as he looked upon the group.

“We must give up one, to save 99, so that he won’t swoop.”

They all froze in fear, having heard tales, of the creature known as The Bloop.

 

I thought of the strange barkeep, his final warning tolled,

And felt myself be lifted, as the seas below me rolled.

Somehow the crew determined that MY soul would be sold,

In place of all the others, to the seas the Bloop patrolled.

 

The Bloop was enormous, complete with gill and fin.

His razor-sharp teeth equipped, to rip both bone and skin.

His eyes held the death of sailors, his victims from within.

I prayed to God for quickened death, and forgiveness of my sin.

 

As I held my breath and braced, for death’s untimely knock,

I felt my focused senses dull; my body went to shock.

And realized this ending, would have been from different stock,

If only I had paused enough, to be sure to wind my clock.

 

So if a terrible sound you hear, as you sail upon the sea,

Turn back around, change your course, so you can remain free.

Or Darkness just may seek you out, for soul captivity,

And the Bloop might swallow you up whole, just as he did me.

 

 

 

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